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Bobby Jordan
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0 posted 2008-02-06 05:30 PM


It’s a hot summer night.  

Sally and Felix;
are roller skating on the
Philadelphia Art Museum’s
portico.  

Sally is in her halter-top and shorts,
Felix in his swimming trunks.  

Their bodies glisten in the street lights
with sweat from their exertion.

They’re panting hard.  

Felix likes the way Sally looks.  
Sally likes the way Felix looks.  

They decide to slip off
to the bushes by the river,
for a little talk.

Bobby

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-02-06 05:34 PM


Very Beautifully Said!

Lovely

Enjoying the story more and more

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-02-06 05:42 PM


amiles...oooh I'm pleased Felix has Sally in his life Bobby...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bobby Jordan
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3 posted 2008-02-06 06:15 PM


Artic Wind,

Thanks for liking Sally and Felix.  They’re good kids.

The portico is a beautiful place, in so many ways.

Bobby


Bobby Jordan
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4 posted 2008-02-06 06:18 PM


RDB,

What you say is very true.  Sally and Felix are lucky to have each others company.

Love Bobby

TomMark
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5 posted 2008-02-06 06:35 PM


Starting another life stage. Beautiful.

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6 posted 2008-02-06 06:38 PM


Enjoying this Felix-Sally love moment.
Bobby Jordan
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7 posted 2008-02-06 06:42 PM


TomMark,

Yes, and that’s the way it happens, isn’t it--so suddenly.

I’m pleased you found it beautiful.

Bobby

Bobby Jordan
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8 posted 2008-02-06 06:43 PM


Midnitesun,

Yes, and Sally and Felix enjoyed it too.

I’m very pleased that you enjoyed it.

Bobby

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