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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-29 10:40 AM


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A long white scarf
On withered grasses

Wet gray mist
The morning road

In the mirror
Of my heart
I see only you

Melting snow .  .  .
From wooden eaves


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-29 10:47 AM


Very beautiful.

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2008-01-29 12:39 PM


fine images!

I am most fond of:

"In the mirror
Of my heart
I see only you"

Applause!

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-01-29 12:39 PM


Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2008-01-29 12:42 PM


John~
This is a soft and lovely shade of ink from you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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TomMark
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5 posted 2008-01-29 05:12 PM


Winter love
frozen heart crying
solid tears


Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-01-30 05:29 PM


"In the mirror of my heart." Beautiful.
                                   Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-01-31 01:47 AM


In the mirror
Of my heart
I see only you

Melting snow .  .  .
From wooden eaves


John, a lovely gifting here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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