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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2007-10-26 11:09 PM





The witch’s broomstick

The night was calm,
Not a goon in sight.
The little old witch,
Flew into the night.

She held it tight,
As the broom flew high.
She said a curse,
“Cursing you little brats to die”

She cackled and danced
Into the sky.
But her old little broom
Failed to fly.

She fell and she fell,
Down to the ground.
The little old broom
Made not a puff or sound.

The witch was furious,
Didn’t know what to do.
She turned on the tele
Because there was no one to BOO!

“Wait!” screamed the witch.
She got off of her seat.
The tele shouted out,
“This broom will put the fly in your feet!”

“300 horse power,
With a touch of leather.
The new broom 3000,
Is light as a feather.

The witch screamed “YEAH”,
As she phoned right in.
“Yes I want one of those.
Is it straight as a pin?”


Happy witch got the broom,
As they both flew off.
She felt the leather.
Oh dear, how soft.

The broom ran out of gas,
No broom station in sight.
The witch screamed out loud,
As she fell down in fright.

“That’s it”, screamed the witch.
“I am done with this broom!
With one more fall,
I will be meeting my doom!”

So the witch went back,
To the little old broom.
It may not go fast.
Not even a VROOM!

The night was calm.
Not a goon in sight.
With her fingers crossed,
She flew into the night.

ARCTIC WIND

HAPPY HALLOWEEN PIPTALK

© Copyright 2007 Arctic Wind - All Rights Reserved
LindsayP
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1 posted 2007-10-27 02:19 AM



Nice write Arctic Wind and great immagination.

Lindsay

Xillus_Xavier
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2 posted 2007-10-27 02:26 AM


Great comical poem with Halloween right around the corner
Margherita
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3 posted 2007-10-27 08:34 AM


A great fun write, dear Arctic Wind. You have a very eclectic poetic talent.

Happy Halloween!
Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2007-10-27 05:19 PM


lindsayP

thank you, and happy halloween to YOU!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-10-27 05:20 PM


X_X

well, thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-10-27 05:20 PM


Margherita-

would like to ride on the broom

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

Martie
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7 posted 2007-10-27 05:56 PM


Hi Artic Wind...I wanted to thank you for the comments you left on a few of my poems and to tell you that I think this one, delightful.
Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-10-27 05:57 PM


Martie-

why thank you

and your welcome

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

Seeker72
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9 posted 2007-10-27 06:32 PM


Very nice ARCTIC WIND.
ivordavies
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10 posted 2007-10-27 09:17 PM



So the witch went back,
To the little old broom.
It may not go fast.
Not even a VROOM!

But at least with that
she could clean her room!

Now the witch goes out
with a cyclone vac
Dyson guarantees
that she'll always get back!


Tears-of-Sanity
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11 posted 2007-10-28 12:23 PM


Wide imagination...
I like it and halloween is lucky to have a poem like this for celebration.

I don't really know what halloween is all about, but I think I would like to watch some of the ceremonies done for celebration. Looks like fun.  hehe

Tears of Sanity~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2007-10-28 04:05 AM


Nice writing...James
Artic Wind
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13 posted 2007-10-28 11:11 AM


seeker-

thank you


happy halloween

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2007-10-28 11:11 AM


ivordavies-

thank you

happy halloween

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2007-10-28 11:12 AM


Tears-

havent seen you in a while,

thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2007-10-28 11:12 AM


JamesMichael-

thank you james

happy halloween

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2007-10-28 04:07 PM


Awww, AW, that was a charming Halloween poem!

~ Bewitching!

Happy Halloweenie huggums 'n a Hershey's chocolate kiss,

EA

Magnus
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18 posted 2007-10-28 04:09 PM


cute,  enjoyed the chuckle....poor witch,
I feel sorry for her.

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2007-10-28 04:10 PM


ea

thank you,

i am glad you enjoyed the poem

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2007-10-28 04:11 PM


magnus-

thank you, and the witch is fine
HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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21 posted 2007-10-28 08:34 PM


The night was calm.
Not a goon in sight.
With her fingers crossed,
She flew into the night.


~~enjoyed your broomtale

M

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2007-10-29 02:18 PM


nakdthoughts-

Thank you, it was fun writting this poem

HAPPY HALLOWEEN


ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine
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23 posted 2007-10-31 09:39 AM


...and back to the top for the Season's at hand!


Artic Wind
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24 posted 2007-10-31 04:10 PM


sunshine-

thank you so much

HAPPY HALLOWEEN

ARCTIC WIND

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