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Mike Montana
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0 posted 2007-10-17 09:24 PM


Open our eyes to a new mourning, sunshine, continues to the next day, you’re on my mind

No definition for your smile with two, me and you, happily ever after

A comedy romance filled with laughter, enjoyment to hold you near

You’re my woman no need to fear, holding you near with my passion and protection

My woman, my friend my angel with great affection, feelings blossom like flowers in spring

Your voice is beauty as when birds sing, you are a butterfly define as the more intellectual

Poems you possess felt deeply is sub-textual, it’s special just like the first day I met you

Tenderness is my experience to handle you with care, our and us is only fair, sharing

Staring into your eyes, where the truth lies there, we are like shoes and socks we come as a pair

My woman, my advisor my playmate, you could call me at anytime cause it’s never too late

No hesitation on my part for you, im here standing along your side when you’re feeling blue

I’ll be your everlasting thought when you don’t have a clue

Im here to help you if you don’t know what to do, willing, you are appealing your trust in me

You’re my stimulant and substance that keeps me high and intoxicated, im on cloud nine

My woman, my counselor my significant other, I give you the same respect as my mother

Intimate lover, intimate friend I know through fair-weather times you would be there until the end

I seen good in you, you gave me strong advice on things I shouldn’t do

For this I thank you, now im not running, I hope this last forever that you would be my woman


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-10-18 06:52 AM


WOW!  what a lovely tribute to your woman, your friend, your soulmate... very nicely expressed.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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2 posted 2007-10-18 09:27 AM


enjoyed reading your thoughts here, very sweet... welcome to pip
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-10-22 04:10 PM


A good show of appreciation your woman...James
Mike Montana
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4 posted 2007-10-26 07:40 AM


Thanks
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