One Day ( Changes within the soul)

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illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

0 posted 2007-10-23 11:55 PM

One Day.
One day, before I die;

I will fly in a balloon above the world
And adopt a little orphan girl,
I will donate to the poor my very last penny
And give them food when their stomachs are empty.
I will write about all of the woes in my life,
Sleep under the stars from some mountain high.
I will dance in the rain but remember the droughts
As I help dig a well for those going without,
The life saving water I consider not each day,
I will hold hands with the sick and endeavour to pray,
For those who will never know love as I do,
Or see a sun rise in a morning view.
I will consider what freedom really means,
As I walk through a park or stand by a stream,
I will think of those who have borrowed time,
As they hold hands with lovers who live in denial.
I will appreciate all that I have in this world,
And stop wishing that I was some other girl,
I will be thankful for all of my memories
For those who have loved me; my family.
I will do all of these things, before I’m old and grey,
Before father time ebbs my life away.
I solemnly promise, I’ll do it;
....... One day.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-10-24 04:14 AM

A beautiful promise, being able to write of it you are already able to realize it, now, because "one day" is too far away ...

Your heart shines through beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2007-10-24 04:55 AM

seriously beautiful.

you made my heart smile with this, and it's been a while since i've read something that can do that. uplifting.

start today!!

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-10-24 07:05 AM

Wonderful thoughts...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-10-24 12:34 PM

Illusive One, you truly are an angel.

May you live for a long, long time. The world needs more people with spirits as full of Light as yours.

Love & Light ~ and a great, big hug!

EA

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

5 posted 2007-10-24 06:25 PM

Margherita,

Your words made me smile so much. Very sweet of you, thank you. It is wonderful to know that something one writes may even a little touch their soul.

Thank you.

illusive

x

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

6 posted 2007-10-24 06:26 PM

Hi Ethan and good to meet you.

I am bowled over at my work being called,

seriously beautiful....thank you so much. It made my day!

Illusive x

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

7 posted 2007-10-24 06:28 PM

Hi Earth!!

Wow! I am so completely blown away with some of kind words I have received about this piece...thank you so much. It is very humbling.

Illusive x

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

8 posted 2007-10-24 06:28 PM

Hi james...

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. All feedback gladly appreciated.

Illusive x

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2007-10-26 07:09 AM

make sure you never lose this list! a wonderful read and I hope you start one day soon.. lovely thoughts here... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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