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alex09
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since 2007-10-12
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0 posted 2007-10-12 03:27 PM



some poems don't ryme
somethings don't work
some people can't love

you got to let go
if you want to or not
maiby it's for the best

let me tell you something
something that may help
btu you never know

sometimes love
is letting go
even when you want to hold on tight

let them be
let them free
they'll foever be in your heart

their memories may
fade away maiby even fly
all you've got to do is say goodbye.....

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-10-12 05:31 PM


Nice...I think perhaps love is always letting go...not holding on too tight...letting it be their choice to stay with us the period of time they want to share in love...James
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