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Open Poetry #41

. . . the greatest gift

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-10-12 12:33 PM

the parched lips useless
malfunctioning heart implodes
the mind screams for help
knowing in those last seconds
love remains the greatest gift

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-10-12 01:36 PM

I'm sure this is the truth and it would be nice to be aware of it in time before that last moment surprises us.

Good to read you!

Fine poem!

Love,
Margherita

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

2 posted 2007-10-12 02:02 PM

And a wonderful gift indeed!

It's as great as the gift of life.

Thanks for sharing.

quatro

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2007-10-12 07:09 PM

And for now, and for always
An eternal embrace
Love remains, the greatest gift

So happy to welcome you back Interloper.
Loved this one.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2007-10-12 07:59 PM

Hi Interloper! It is so good to see you again. Where have you been hiding. Yes, love is, indeed, the greastest gift.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2007-10-12 08:51 PM

I have missed you too Doctor Love
you and your gifts like this one

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2007-10-13 03:37 AM

Hi Interloper,
I enjoyed your poem. You don't know me, I'm fairly new here. Nice to meet you.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2007-10-13 03:43 AM

What a wonderful thought to have in the terror of the ultimate moment!

- Owl

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