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Crystal Lake |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Crystal Lake Along pure-crystal waters a soft Autumn breeze wrinkles ripples on the face of Time, disturbing only… floating clouds and perfect moonlight. There is a second ‘heaven’ in this lake of mirrors! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"wrinkles ripples" ohhhh, I love the sound of this allit! This MUST be read outloud..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bruce, may I borrow some of your ink to put in my pen?!? ~ Pretty please!  Linda  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Crystal Clear lol nice read ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It is too bad we can't all see things through your eyes, Bruce. The world would be a different and better place. At least you can describe it to us and very well too. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I know of this place and of this atmosphere ... wonderful ... a crystal lake is my domain Love, Margherita  |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
There are many favorite lines in this write, but these - "There is a second ‘heaven’ in this lake of mirrors!" are superb! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such superb minimalism! |
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