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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2007-09-20 06:17 PM

Drawn to you

Incited by your whispers
blown like petals all over
the empty garden of my heart,
unable to resist your gaze
squeezing every inch of my flesh
achingly caressing my very core,
driven by the urgency
of this untamed desire
I fell into oblivion of self
and followed you
helplessly drawn to you.

You knew a place under the sky
where only Angels were allowed.
Embedded in fragrant flowers
we remembered our innocence
and dared to be what we truly are:
winged beings of divine essence.

No sugar and no honey
compare to the sweetness
of harvesting eagerly
each other’s ripe fruits
abundant in their variety
and offered in total abandon.

Did Nature record our love song
rising from the depth of our souls?
Did you see the treetops sway
to the rhythm of our breath?
Did you hear the birds sharing
in the concert of our heartbeats?
Did you notice the gathering
of butterflies and buzzing bees?

When Love is lived like this
the sun and the moon bow
to the lovers lost in each other,
aware of their pure beauty.
Satisfaction and gratitude
vibrate throughout every cell.
Do you see now to what extent
I am drawn to you?

Only Angels are allowed
to enter this secret place …
Have you heard the rustling
of their silver wings
amidst smiling flowers
and giggling blades of grass?
And did you notice the ladybugs
bathing in the droplets
glistening all over my skin?

Yes, I am …
helplessly
drawn to you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-09-20 07:27 PM

Passionate and deep.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2007-09-20 09:40 PM

Lovely words Margherita telling a lovely story, enjoyed it.
Lindsay

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-09-20 10:03 PM

Oh, Margherita, whether your writing be spiritual, inspirational, cosmic, or on nature ~ or love, I am captivated.

"I am drawn to" your pennings.

Loving hug,

Linda

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-09-20 10:44 PM

You knew a place under the sky
where only Angels were allowed.
Embedded in fragrant flowers
we remembered our innocence
and dared to be what we truly are:
winged beings of divine essence.

...

Only Angels are allowed

...

Yes...and sometimes

PiP friends...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-09-21 06:23 AM

ms mar' lovely romantica here, enjoyed this

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2007-09-21 06:53 AM

reminds me of some of the feelings I have for my sweetheart, yet my words don't flow as smooth, as descriptive as yours...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-09-21 07:24 AM

Very nice.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2007-09-21 03:15 PM

Lovely, Margherita, and if people don't look closer and deeper after reading this then I venture to suggest that they will be the losers.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-09-24 10:56 AM

ANOTHER WONDERFUL POEM, BY ONE OF MY FAV, i have just posted my second poem yah! ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2007-09-24 12:39 PM

Very romantic and well written.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2007-09-24 12:40 PM

Very romantic and well written.

ameteurpoet101
Junior Member

since 2007-09-24

Posts 18
The island of sunshine, Jamaica

12 posted 2007-09-24 03:47 PM

I like ur peom its very deep and expressive~

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

13 posted 2007-09-24 04:24 PM

Wow! This poem is absolutely stunning. I loved the flow of your words--so effortlessly.

Take care,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

14 posted 2007-09-25 08:24 PM

"No sugar and no honey
compare to the sweetness
of harvesting eagerly
each other’s ripe fruits"

amazing Margherita
and ever so sensual

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

15 posted 2007-09-29 02:53 PM

I love this poem so much. It happens to match my own vision of eternal life in heaven and what you wrought here is powerful. I am humbled by your skill and artistry. I shall now grovel at your feet. lol

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2007-09-29 04:48 PM

MsMargheritaGal~
You just shed a ray of sunlight into my day~

I adore this ... breathtakingly beautiful~
(as you are)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

17 posted 2007-10-02 01:35 PM

Thank you my dear poet friends for your loving comments, enjoyed them.

Love,
Margherita

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

18 posted 2007-10-03 08:00 PM

So awesome!! You have a way with words!

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