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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Retroactive Somewhere inside hides the meaning of my life, where belief held its own and each breath claimed adventure. Somewhere inside, I counted. I meant something to someone and could spell out the feelings with each beat of my heart. I remember those sunsets, the seamless words of love, the moment to moment excitement of embracing the pureness of life. But for now, the masquerade has begun. I rein in the dark until I am in a better place and can feel the comfort of a sunrise to warm what feels only the cold. Somewhere inside, are the lyrics to a new tune, holding onto hope. Each note to lift in song and truth, yet forever lined with the old ...to remind me of then. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMsWynterBliss~ 'Somewhere inside, I counted. I meant something to someone' ... oh how much I like this thought~  Have a beautiful evening my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know just how you feel. I feel the same way. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
An (obviously) heartfelt and especially powerful, emotive ‘write’! “The following is exceptionally fine!: “Somewhere inside hides the meaning of my life, where belief held its own and each breath claimed adventure(!)”; And, so is: “…sunsets, the seamless words of love, the moment to moment excitement of embracing the pureness of life(!)”; As well as the ending: “Somewhere inside, are the lyrics to a new tune, holding onto hope. Each note to lift in song and truth, yet forever lined with the old ...to remind me of then(!)” serious, sustained applause!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, Thank you for the visit. I always appreciate your thoughts. Sue, Thank you. I hope you feel better and have a nice restful weekend. hugs M Bruce, I am wondering whether this is the field I want to be in, considering this last experience showed me how little some administrations care whether their children in the schools learn or not. It seems my positive perspective on life may be too idealistic( like when I was young). I needed a week to recover from it all and hopefully today will be a better day. Thanks, Maureen |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Somewhere inside, are the lyrics to a new tune, holding onto hope. Each note to lift in song and truth, yet forever lined with the old ...to remind me of then." Love this write, especially the last verse. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...each day is a new experience...with something beneficial to impart to us...and new opportunities to give of ourselves....James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Somewhere inside hides the meaning of my life, where belief held its own and each breath claimed adventure. oh my, what a glorious write, so beautifully spirtual melts the heart....wonderful job.... enjoyed. Lee J. |
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