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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-09-11 10:07 AM


            Renewal

Shake off all contrivences.
Soar with the cliffs and eagles.

Wisdom and Nature are walking
ancient ways of mountain and forest.

Follow them…

through the gentle twilight,
with open mind…calm heart…
   clear spirit…
in endless dreams rising
to the “morning star!”
                  ~

© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 2007-09-11 10:16 AM


Bruce

You share beautiful and wise words to help me start my day.  Your poetry flows so beautifully and carries thought-provoking messages.

Thank you
A

ArtSolstice
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2 posted 2007-09-11 01:09 PM


... so beautifully written ...
TomMark
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3 posted 2007-09-11 01:55 PM


again, a beauty to enjoy!!!

thank you!!

Tomtoo

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2007-09-14 09:24 PM


very uplifting words
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5 posted 2007-09-14 10:28 PM



sky1er
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6 posted 2007-09-14 11:51 PM


this takes me back to my youth in the mountains and forest. can feel the chilly night air, even. visceral.
ArtSolstice
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7 posted 2007-09-15 08:09 PM


This is such a pleasure to re-read, especially after an afternoon in the forest...
LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-09-15 08:16 PM




it reminded me of this...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fl-iM8kpiuE&mode=related&search=

such lovely words you pleasure us with...

enjoyed, thank you

Bobby Jordan
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9 posted 2007-09-15 09:19 PM


Seconhanddreampoet,

Very good, "contrivances" is such an elegant word.  I like it.

Bobby

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