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Open Poetry #41

Two Hearts Closer To Forever

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-09-04 05:46 PM

Two Hearts Closer To Forever

Me in Honolulu.
She in Chicago.
Both of us
dearly missing
the closeness of two
hearts close to forever.

My love for her
growing stronger
every day, even
while the object of
my love is far away
I shall love her.

Someday me and my love
will always be together
to share the love that
lives in our hearts,
two hearts closer to forever.

JamesLee
04September
2007

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (09-04-2007 06:22 PM).]

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2007-09-04 08:15 PM

Jim

Distance lends enchantment

John

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2007-09-04 09:29 PM

the same stars shine down on the both of you.
No matter the distance apart.

MoonShadow
.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2007-09-04 09:36 PM

A very touching poem

LindsayP

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-09-04 10:45 PM

"two hearts closer to forever."

Nice write James.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-09-05 04:50 AM

Thank you Huan, Moon Shadow, Lindsay and JL for the wonderful responses...its been almost four years now...for me and my love...sometimes here and sometimes in Chicago...she emailed me a picture the other day, using her picture phone to my computer and I printed it, she has the most beautiful smile...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-09-05 06:36 PM

a most pleasant Romantic 'write'!

I hope the wish, with which this poem ends,
comes true!

applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-09-06 03:39 PM

Thank you dreampoet...and I hope it continues to come true...James

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