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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-30 04:55 PM


Candy

I wondered why
Candy got her
breasts so huge,
so I ask a friend
of hers, and he said
"I'm not sure, you'll
have to ask her."
So I made a special
trip to see Candy
and to clarify a few
thoughts going through
my head, and to make sure
that Candy measured up to
the things that everyone said.
So now I'm in Candys place
and me and Candy are
face to face, to settle
any concerns that have arisen
over this overly large situation.
So I found myself saying right away,
"Candy, your breasts seem to
be as big as they say."
And Candy just smiled,
and said "its time
to play."

JamesLee
30August
2007




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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
1 posted 2007-08-30 05:14 PM


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Good Jim

John

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-09-01 07:09 AM


Thank you John for the nice response...James
JL
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3 posted 2007-09-03 03:54 AM


Nice oeuvre



JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2007-09-05 12:19 PM



Your poem paints a lovely picture

LindsayP

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-09-06 03:40 PM


Thank you JL and Lindsay for the nice responses...James
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