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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2007-08-29 04:45 PM


In silver shadow of the moon
so gently does a spirit soar
while yesterdays sorrows be strewn
this night softly now offers more.

The aura of moonshadow glow
gives shimmering light from above
to soothe gentle spirits below
and share hope eternal for love.

There the two spirits learn to fly
embracing the dawning of morn.
The end of darkness now is nigh
and faith in tomorrow reborn.

The moonshadow power is strong
and magic of love is the key.
As one gentle spirits belong
to last for an eternity.

© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-08-29 05:07 PM


Silky...James
SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2007-08-29 05:20 PM


Very well done!
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-08-29 06:50 PM


Very lovely this duet, so perfect for this night lit by the full moon!

Beautiful job!

Love,
Margherita

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2007-08-30 12:02 PM




an exquisite duet
by two gentle souls
hugs to you both


MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
5 posted 2007-08-30 07:45 AM


James... Thanks for the read.

S.Chick... Thank you.

Margherita... Beautiful moon... Yes!!

MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
6 posted 2007-08-30 07:46 AM


Milady Kate, Thank you for your kindness..
          ... and the lovely hug (sigh).

                MoonShadow
.

MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
7 posted 2007-08-30 07:49 AM


My Thanks to Donna for giving me the opportunity
  to experience a duet for the first time.
   I am most humbly grateful, Gentle Spirit.
       Thank you.

          MoonShadow
.

aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
8 posted 2007-09-01 12:19 PM


Beautiful, beautiful!

It flows like silver when read.
It's beautiful.

A

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
9 posted 2007-09-01 03:04 AM


Excellent work.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
10 posted 2007-09-01 03:33 AM


beautiful, indeed.
enjoyed the reading
Tomtoo

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