I Love A Woman/Chapters1&2

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Open Poetry #41

I Love A Woman/Chapters1&2

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-26 05:05 PM

I Love A Woman/Chapters1&2

I love a woman
but she keeps
going away
and I don't
know what
to say
except I
miss her.

PerhapsSomeday

Perhaps someday
when she goes away
I won't miss
her anymore.

JamesLee
26August
2007

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-08-26 05:20 PM

This could be a logical consequence, but maybe there are alternatives?

Perhaps ...

I will follow your story.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-26 06:00 PM

Thanks for responding Margherita...
My mind and heart are taking me through a process of many options...
I have progressed to Chapter 5 now with much different thoughts about love...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-08-27 10:14 PM

love takes us through so many chapters James

I love this

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-08-28 06:15 AM

Thank you Lady for the nice response...I have written 5 chapters now...James

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