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poetryisapassion
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since 2007-08-23
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0 posted 2007-08-23 08:22 PM



Many years have passed us by
Most of them I have cried
I see you walk down the street
And wonder how'd we meet
You caught my eye
And now I sigh
Because I know
We couldn't tie the bow
Or live without a past
And make it last

I try and try
but never succeed
I'll give my life
And you roll me like i'm dice
Our chance is gone
So say so long
And we can pass each other by
and we know it won't be a tie
Between our hearts that now part

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sweetbomb
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since 2007-08-07
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1 posted 2007-08-23 09:54 PM


How about not walking where you might pass? There's a song in Oklahoma, I Can't Say No. How far have we come? When your dog dies, you get a new one because so many of them are waiting out there for a good home. Shine on and love again. D
poetryisapassion
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2 posted 2007-08-23 09:59 PM


I didn't really write it about not ever having someone i pass not like me... I wrote it about that one person that you will pass that you know you should be soulmates but there's someone else.


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3 posted 2007-09-06 12:18 PM


your a natural , and this is straight from the heart .... i just know and the feeling of being so far away ... never lose hope
arizona, i have come close but never lost it - for the future is what you truly wish it to be ... ~J


In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-09-06 03:42 PM


Enjoyed...James
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