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Open Poetry #41

Have You Known?

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-08-20 09:51 AM

Have You Known?

You still can hear me breathing,
But have you ever thought
That I'm holding my breath just for you?

You still can see my heart bleeding,
But have you ever known
That it's pierced by the sword, meant for you?

Don't turn away, having asked me
If I love life more than you.
Sure I'll say that I do.
Have you known
You and my life are the same?
You're my life and the one who has saved it,
You're the strength,
Flowing to my heart through my veins.

If only I were a gentle wind
To touch your face,
To dry your tears,
To chase your sorrows away,
To let you feel me,
Calming you down...
And you'd know
I'll come back now and then...

Have you ever known
I'll be everything for you?

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-08-20 04:30 PM

Enjoyed...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-08-20 05:17 PM

a touching, romantic, heart-felt, and fine 'write'!

Applause!

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

3 posted 2007-08-21 06:08 AM

Thank you!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2007-08-21 09:30 AM

"You still can see my heart bleeding,
But have you ever known
That it's pierced by the sword, meant for you?

Don't turn away, having asked me
If I love life more than you.
Sure I'll say that I do.
Have you known
You and my life are the same?

If only I were a gentle wind
To touch your face,
To dry your tears,
To chase your sorrows away,
To let you feel me,
Calming you down...
And you'd know
I'll come back now and then..."

~~
Conflicts in life and love, in a very nice write.

JL

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2007-08-22 02:19 AM

emotional write again.

I like every one of them

Tomtoo

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

6 posted 2007-08-24 10:48 AM

Thank you!

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