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Driving Through The Rain
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Driving Through The Rain |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Yeah, Yes, Iam driving , Driving through the rain, Rain is coming down harder, I have to drive through the rain, Through the pain, Driving these thoughts on you away, Driving through this way, Driving through this day, Finding a love, Finding a heart, To look uponlove, Finding a heart, To look upon this feeling, This feeling I have Driving through the rain, Whole day, Thinking of you, All the way, Through home, Hoping and praying hard, That you would be waiting for me, And open the door, for me I just can't stop missing you, While Iam driving my car, Through this weather, Let my heart stay longer, Let my love stay longer, I should never get wrong again, I should smile through these thoughts Driving through this rain, Iam trying to drive through this rain driving through car.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandana, could feel you in this one. Hugs sweetie. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
we want constant forward movement...in the car, in love yet, sometimes they take turns, or halt good read, lady! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
there is sunshine in your words at the edges of this journey well penned ms |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ ALWAYS good to see you join us here~ Lovely portrayal of emotions sweetie~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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