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Shivers of the Rose
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Shivers of the Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The breath of my lamp still flickers, oft dancing on the walls of my eyes...capturing the delusory bloom of the shivering rose upon pursed lips...an ocular softness which comes within a starlit night’s dream... An aspiration, casually awaiting the clinging flood of a river’s song before capturing a lyre’s mesmerizing flirt. For aged grasping whispers still breath life into tingling fingertips as silent ears tranquilize the lyre... and a giggle fondly chases the wary fox’s tail into the waiting briar before slumber stumbles and falls onto the cool dry kip and lapsing dream,yet dreamed, awaits the bloom of a saucy shivering rose. [This message has been edited by Magnus (08-06-2007 03:29 PM).] |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
This was nice. I wish I could say it in a better way, but NICE I believe sums it up. Nah, It's great. Garfield |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
oh damn~ this tingles~ especially liked: "and a giggle fondly chases the wary fox’s tail into the waiting briar before slumber stumbles and falls onto the cool dry kip and lapsing dream,yet dreamed, awaits the bloom of a saucy shivering rose. " ~just lovely |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
eloquent m'friend... descriptive and filled with imagery that pleases... a pleasure.... to read. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"a saucy shivering rose" yes indeed what a visual I love the way you do that Barry |
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