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blizzard of two dog woman
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blizzard of two dog woman |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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two dog woman walks under bridge trees talks to god about her sons and the war over there with the peekaboo people her tattoos are brown with sad eyes she pets them when she rubs her belly calls them her new children pure bread pentecostal apache the mow men have seen her magic when she touches trees and roses wears her green thumb gloves says you have to smile for them so they know they are alive things not just dying wood waiting for paper and she bowls on thursdays takes momma jane to costco after then to dq for a blizzard on summer days ____________ logograph by daark |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
darkie~ I swear you are a cult unto yourself...your poetry tribute to that talent... lovely, as ever~ ~beLLe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wonderful Mr Daark... what a brilliant mind you have! RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this one is very reminiscint of Birthday Fifth D. That one was a favorite of mine, and this one is right up there, with that one. yep, bind it big D, bind it. The world would be in for such a treat. *kotc* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your mind portrays beautifully... well done, sir. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always a pleasure to see your words grace the page.. a nod to the talent...you are |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I say you go beyond the word talent, into masterful :bow: |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I agree...masterful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(soft chuckle) oh..I meant to take nothing away from how good I truly think the poet and the poetry is... I just rarely use masterful... but masterful fits... quite well \ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think I know that woman~~ good write, D a story unto itself  M |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
A telling character study. Love it. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine (powerful) ‘write’! I am particularly fond of: “pure bread pentecostal apache” AND: “…you have to smile for them so they know they are alive things not just dying wood waiting for paper” serious, sustained applause!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello DS You write with such a compassionate pen, and cursive honesty. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you guys just make me fold my screen and grin...YOU each make the blessings of my words drift to the folks they are about...thank you all, I am truly humble by your thoughts. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling here yet again you take the primal image, and without dressing it up in gossamer, you manage resonate memorable emotions that stir up a squirm a "blizzard" eh? Amazing how something so cold can seem so hot...  Can I call you "master" too? *laughing* You do not disappoint, m'friend.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene one...oh hush..you make the gravel in my pockets show, thanks babe!! |
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