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Honey Bath
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Honey Bath |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Honey Bath The surface cannot quite divulge The depths that flow below indulge And so, though chance it seems has past This reconcile of love at last A date on get to know won’t dwell All that my heart and soul foretell So realized, that fear leaves shy The common veils I own belie For seeping out through lace and lock For you, pushed through an artists block In visions wrap ten fingers round The gentle depths in words profound Love lost has been my epitaph Released to sponge this honey bath A rivers power rushes through In passion that I feel for you That floods the banks deceiving bark Transformed beneath you as an ark With tenderness I cup the waves To bathe you in for all my days If time has spent itself without My heart has not, without a doubt So sweet the future by your side The whispers of release to ride I wear the scent of always near An unrelenting call comes clear For buoyed in the aftermath So deep the waters, honey bath Copyright Kkh 7/29/07 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh yes, I do love when you write in rhyme like you have in this poem.... Great passion and feelings reside within this poetic piece...Encore!! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
The flow and rhyme are equisite, TD. Just lovely. Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps I need one of these honeybaths...James |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes, the flow and rhyme are very equisite!!!!!! |
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