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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-07-28 04:46 PM





Still, your eyes speak of love held tenderly,
glowing down upon the hearts of three.
I now write of you both, of this, and how
I would know the beauty of your face
no not here, not now, but in another time and place


and I would remember your voice, the sound,
and oh yes, surely that grin
when time has come and gone
we would begin again

but until then

I shall hold you both
so tenderly
in my heart and soul
within every part of me

I can see you there
holding hands in wait
Mom, I'll finally meet you there
and Dad, I'll see you again

at heaven's gate.

{Karilea, my sisters and I can not
thank you enough, for this precious
gifting.... }

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2007-07-28 04:59 PM


Donna, I see how much you look like your Mom~~


Beautiful words.


M

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-07-29 11:10 AM


M~ thank you.  Until Karilea did this picture for me, (combined the two pictures into one) I had never seen a pic of them together before.  I shared the photo with my sisters.  We are all so very touched to have this.
latearrival
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3 posted 2007-07-29 12:57 PM


Beautiful, and yes you look so much like your mom. And thank you Karilea for giving this precious gift to our gentle spirit.

latearrival

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-07-29 06:00 PM


I enjoyed reading of this love and beliefs...thanks for sharing...James
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5 posted 2007-07-29 09:00 PM


I know this feeling.  Over the past year or
so,  we have come across a moderate stash of
family pictures that go back about 50 to 60
years in time.  Such memories...  you are
blessed.

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6 posted 2007-07-30 12:13 PM


hugging you.....

precious!

~~**~~
Life is a balance
of holding on and letting go (KU)

Kahlil
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7 posted 2007-07-30 09:21 AM


Beautiful!  You are, they are, as is your prayerful write.
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2007-07-30 09:50 AM


a very special gift; a wonderful 'write'!

serious, sustained applause!!

Martie
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9 posted 2007-07-30 12:53 PM


Donna...When I started reading this, I heard Karilea in the back ground clapping and you taking a bow, and then you switched places.  Such a dear memory does that.  
Rick
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10 posted 2007-07-30 03:33 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is wonderful and I feel very happy for you and your sisters, it is great having good friends, they lessen the burdens of life and make special moments smile. Looked like a lovely couple and your mum has a wonderful smile.

Rick

poeticdestiny
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11 posted 2007-07-30 08:18 PM


Beautiful write.
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2007-08-02 06:15 AM


Thank you each for sharing a moment with me, and them.  HUGS and thank you's....
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