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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-07-19 06:32 AM



it used the be your mountains
that my eyes would climb on morning tide
from the drifting of my dragon

I would use my hands
to devour their volume
begging for more with a hunger

more than a day's worth eye full
perhaps a panting ravenousity
and then my bow was nudged subtle

by the seam of your sea and sand
the bashful bay ceremony
of your willingness to bear my wood

and the blessed journey's ending
where my rudder could press in furrow
of a lover's virgin embracing

and calm waters would steal my soul
___________
logograph by daark



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BBGrrl
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1 posted 2007-07-19 09:01 AM


*smile*
Tricksy, you are...
enjoyed.

SEA
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2 posted 2007-07-19 09:46 AM


so very soothing to read this...nice and warm  
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-07-19 10:00 AM


Every thing that you write, is something that I love.  And that last line is pure soulful reflection perfection.  
Moonkist
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4 posted 2007-07-19 10:03 AM


Try if you might
And you will find
The gentle lapping
Of our soul's mind...

I agree with SEA - very soothing... also hypnotic... nice one

"Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears
To-day of past Regrets and future Fears..."
-Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-07-19 05:36 PM


thank you ladies for the touch
WindWalker
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6 posted 2007-07-27 01:38 AM


This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-07-27 06:21 AM


thank you WW
Janette
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8 posted 2007-07-27 12:40 PM


Your logogram is "more than a day's worth eye full," and successfully represents a "bashful bay."

I enjoyed this journey, it is a lovely read.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-07-27 05:35 PM


janette, thanks to you sexy lady for the touch, so nice to see you back
MGROVES
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10 posted 2007-07-30 09:11 PM


always a pleasure, I've missed you~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

bel1e
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11 posted 2007-08-01 08:36 AM


what a lovely awakening...

yes, yes~

~beLLe


Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2007-08-02 06:43 AM


ms G, thanks

__________

ms bel1e, you bless me thanks

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