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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-07-03 06:54 AM


from the old days in dreams
the good ones that happen quickly
and then are gone
before you get any on you

I remember her hair smell
and the laugh side of her eyes
I was always beside her
or behind her pretending

to be across the street walking
and she was walking faster
to get to where I was
with a mouth full of kiss flavors

and the time to share them
before anyone else came along
but it was just a dream
and the sand tasted bitter after

my hands would never be her lips
___________

daark

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-07-03 08:34 AM


love this... a truly beautiful write, D  and one that can bring back  memories~~


M

MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
2 posted 2007-07-03 10:46 AM


a real pleasure~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2007-07-03 06:04 PM




"and she was walking faster
to get to where I was
with a mouth full of kiss flavors"

sharing kiss flavors
lovely stranger darlin'


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2007-07-03 06:17 PM


mmmm... very nice!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-07-04 07:06 AM


ms MMs, thanks babe

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ms groves, thanks for the read

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ladyone, thank you lady friend


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ms r&B, thank you for the walk by

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