navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » moody4
Open Poetry #40
Post A Reply Post New Topic moody4 Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-06-12 03:19 PM


Your snore bothers me
It bothers me every night
I'll give up the moon light
to have my good dream back


[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-12-2007 04:58 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Drauntz - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2007-06-12 05:50 PM


It's not romantic when you are awake in the moonlight and there is a sawmill next to you. But it can creat the most excellent of dreams whare you get a lot of work done. Very neat poem.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

2 posted 2007-06-12 06:19 PM


An honest thought here?..Thank you..

GR

Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2007-06-12 09:22 PM


another one for my library to add to this series that I do love so much!


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #40 » moody4

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary