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Open Poetry #40

The Raven's Eye

The Phat Whale
New Member

since 2007-06-09

Posts 9

0 posted 2007-06-09 05:44 PM

A pearl of ghastly
tales of death,
A gaze to which
We die.

A curse
we cannot break
Or steal, An anger
We can't fight.

It gazes down
into your soul,
The blackness shreds
your mind,

The sorrow is now
drowned in fear,
The hatred turned
to lies, Those who died
and those who cried,
Looked in the
Ravens eyes.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-06-09 05:50 PM

Dark and ominous.
I've stared down a raven or two, found them quite persistent when they wanted something I had.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-06-09 08:43 PM

wow

I like this

gave me chills

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2007-06-10 10:49 PM

I enjoyed this

Ravens are among top on my list of favorite birds. I enjoy their playful, clever nature ~ the Ravens that I live around are hardy, resourceful and far too busy to be menacing. Unless they decide they want one's shiney treasure.

Enjoyed the poem.

A

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-06-12 02:19 PM

well, life. of many kind

enjoyed

RogueandPoet
Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 126
Oregon

5 posted 2007-06-12 03:22 PM

I like a good dark poem, and this was very good.

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