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RogueandPoet
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0 posted 2007-06-12 01:04 PM


Spilt Milk

No ones ever done me wrong
   I’ve simply let a few –
   take the option I had given them
   to play me for a fool.


For their faults and inclinations
   were clear as day – no mystery
   I just chose to hope they’d overcome
   and I looked the other way.


And though I’ve suffered at their hands
   from broken heart and lightened purse -
   I well knew their inner nature
   so they don’t deserve my curse.


And as I believe the universe
   will balance out the tilt
   they’ll get to live with their indiscretions
   and the milk that they have spilt.

[This message has been edited by RogueandPoet (06-12-2007 03:13 PM).]

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MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14
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1 posted 2007-06-12 01:24 PM


wow.. nice poem i especially liked the last stanza.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-06-12 01:30 PM


Reminded me of my thoughts while I was watching Robin Givens last night...
Seems she has written a book about her
less than pleasurable experiences with
Mike Tyson...and I found myself thinking,
"Who would be stupid enough to marry
Mike Tysen."  Hope he doesn't read this
and come and beat me up.  "Who would be
stupid enough to say bad things about
Mike Tyson"...James

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-06-12 01:34 PM


very good, and I shall say, very cool and confident.

enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-06-12 01:35 PM


Yes, the Universe has a way of dishing out karma and we can keep our hands clean, so to speak! lol

If you meant to write "spilt" instead of "split", you can make edit changes by clicking on on the icon of a document and pencil. (Next to the posting date above your poem)

This was a divinely sweet poem.

Love & Light,
EA

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2007-06-12 01:36 PM


ahem...methinks it should be spilt, rather than split
ahem again... Methinks EA beat me to the edit comment

RogueandPoet
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6 posted 2007-06-12 03:12 PM


Thanks, I've made the correction. I'll be scratching my head wondering how I missed that.
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