keeping true to me what about you???

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Open Poetry #40

keeping true to me what about you???

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2007-04-09 03:58 PM

impressive
to say the least
but I found you are
no better than the beast

lies and deciet
trouble me no more
so why don't you just
SHUT your OWN door????

you left it open
they followed me through
I kept my faith
and HE carried ME, BLUE....

you have no blessings
to offer me
so why don't you just
set me free

you seem to like
to judge
based on lies
I thought you
a wiser man
why don't you take
off your disguise

walking where angels
once feared to tread
keeping the faith
you coulda been
thrice as wed

so I wonder now
what grace is like
I've untwisted
the words you twisted
so why don't you
just take a hike
'cuz in my future
I see....
an 800 lb bike

~~~kingsangel~~~

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-09 04:35 PM

what a poem of anger! it ignites me too.
oh.

be happy. spring time.

enjoyed.

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

2 posted 2007-04-10 08:39 AM

Very powerful, I really liked it! It has so much energy about it.

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