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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-04-09 09:28 AM

Wondering whether it's worth it all
the fighting, continuing on.
The price of life its highest now,
the struggle each day as its pawn.

Pressing each worth from the moment's given,
forgetting the worst that's at hand.
Ending the day with negative news,
enduring what's written in sand.

Trying to end just a part of a life,
without holding onto the dread.
Sometimes I wonder, too often what if ...
I just leave my emotions for dead.

Feeling the sadness, masking the day
to push through the weeds of this Spring.
Missing the missing that's hiding out there
with renewal too distant a thing.

It's all about me, though selfish in thought
an existence eked out, want in need.
Or is that a need that is really in want
as I swallow these words that I feed.

Tread lightly, each step to reach all those goals
Just one would suffice at this time.
Standing alone with the whole of my heart
I continue despite...this in rhyme.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2007-04-09 09:40 AM

Love the last line - it took me by surprise. The rest however is pure Naked Thoughts poetry, poetic and heartfelt.

Kethry

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-04-09 10:31 AM

MsBliss~

Yes ... you flow with emotion down the page ... continue please~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2007-04-09 11:03 AM

good read

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-04-09 03:59 PM

"Tread lightly, each step to reach all those goals
Just one would suffice at this time.
Standing alone with the whole of my heart
I continue despite...this in rhyme."

Well said Maureen....hugs and love, Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-09 04:38 PM

"Standing alone with the whole of my heart
I continue despite...this in rhyme."...good spirit. whole heart is much better than a broken heart.

song of spring sorrow
enjoyed

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