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Open Poetry #40

LETTER TO LOVE

little dream
Junior Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 10

0 posted 2007-04-08 03:58 AM

ON THE DAY, I FELL INTO STARS
WITH MY EMOTIONS STIRRED, WITHIN MY HEART
WAS IT LOVE, THAT LEAD ME HERE
PUT ME BACK, AWAY FROM TEARS
A HATE WE LOST, I ONCE FOUND
A BOUNDARY OF LIES, FRIENDS BY MOUTH
BROKEN DOWN WOUNDS, FROM SUICIDE
ITS DEATHS SHADOW, IN WHICH I CONFIDE

LEAVE ME A HEART, TAKE A SOUL
LOVE OH LOVE, LET ME GO
ID DIE TONIGHT, NOT KNOWING A THING
THIS LOVE ONLY TURNED, INTO A FLING
LIFE OF MISERY, LEAD THE WAY
PAINS BLOOD, WASHED AWAY

MY LETTER OF LOVE, IS CLEAR
IT HURTS, TIL DEATH IS NEAR
BE AWARE OF ME, CUPID YOUR NAME
I DIE TODAY, BUT YOU IN VAIN
LET MY ANEMIC BODY, BLEED MY SORROWS
WAIT THE LORDS JUDGEMENT, WHAT FRIENDS FOLLOW

LEAVE ME A HEART, TAKE A SOUL
LOVE OH LOVE, LET ME GO
ID DIE TONIGHT, NOT KNOWING A THING
THIS LOVE ONLY TURNED, INTO A FLING
LIFE OF MISERY, LEAD THE WAY
PAINS BLOOD, WASHED AWAY

LEAVE ME A HEART, TAKE A SOUL
LOVE OH LOVE, LET ME GO
ID DIE TONIGHT, NOT KNOWING A THING
THIS LOVE ONLY TURNED, INTO A FLING
LIFE OF MISERY, LEAD THE WAY
PAINS BLOOD, WASHED AWAY

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2007-04-08 05:20 AM

this is gripping! I love the emotion here!

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

2 posted 2007-04-08 08:20 AM

Powerful writing! Brilliant structure and rhyme as well.
I really liked this.

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

3 posted 2007-04-08 09:48 AM

Beautiful poem! Very intense imagery. I can feel every word!

"LEAVE ME A HEART, TAKE A SOUL
LOVE OH LOVE, LET ME GO"

What a heartfelt plea...
~Terry

PS - Welcome to our little family here at Passions!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-08 10:24 AM

a deep cry of emotion.
"leave me a heart, take the soul" how right. because heart is such a fragile thing,
enjoyed very much.

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