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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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0 posted 2007-04-02 08:24 PM



The moon
Worn and sapped
is silently down
The night
bored and tired,
has closed its eyes.

Life long waiting,
No true love in sight.

© Copyright 2007 Drauntz - All Rights Reserved
paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
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1 posted 2007-04-03 02:25 AM


this is hauntingly beautiful and sad.
very touching.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-04-03 08:21 AM


sigh indeed

love this one

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2007-04-03 05:36 PM




"Life long waiting,
No true love in sight."

painful words
so often true Drauntz

beautifully done...


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4 posted 2007-04-19 04:02 PM


That's a sigh I echo all too often... perhaps because hope is resurrected almost as often as the moon. *S*
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2007-04-19 10:00 PM


What a wonderful spell you cast here...lovely flow to your thoughts.
TD

wordwizard
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on the way to next world
6 posted 2007-04-21 04:16 PM


brief and to the point


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