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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-03-04 06:33 PM



Destiny

From earth’s deep bowels when flames spit forth
and thunder shakes the ground.
A seething mass of melted rock
Is strewn for miles around.

When red grows dark and searing heat
has cooled, but all is torn.
The darkest doom lies on the land
with greyness all forlorn.

In moonlike scenes the earth has changed
its rocks now look like seas.
An envelope of fluid mass
instead of grass and trees.

Remember this, when earth decides
to let its voice be heard.
Not even Gods can change the path
that destiny preferred.

Ivor G Davies




The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2007-03-05 12:25 PM


I always enjoy reading your poetry out loud...as here, it flows so fluidly
Rottiestyl
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since 2007-04-19
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2 posted 2007-04-20 07:51 AM


Quite a hectic scene this paints, well done!

  

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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3 posted 2007-04-20 10:36 AM


are you talking about human's Destiny?!

enjoyed

ivordavies
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4 posted 2007-04-21 03:10 PM


Thanks for your replies,

Volcanoes, sunamies, earthquakes floods, births, deaths, disasters, heatwaves etc. etc.

Nature, human destiny is intetwined with spitual....

Ivor

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