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soul drifter
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0 posted 2007-04-11 03:15 AM


Weather And Emotional Developments At 11

All love that's immortal goes to heaven
weather and emotional developments at 11
counting heartbeats, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
weather and emotional developments at 11

All is fair in love in war, so I am told
but the forecast is nothing but cold
numb my bones, I'm feeling so old
weather and an emotional blanket to hold

'Cause you ain't here
encroaching fear
my dear
you always disappear
when you hear
the faintest sound of me adoring your heart,
so now we're...

Two of a kind
not of one mind
wish I saw the signs
I resigned
to fate not kind
on this poor little me, crying for the love
I once called mine

They say that
all love that's true goes to heaven
but tune in for
weather and emotional developments at 11
I'm counting heartbeats, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
weather and emotional developments at 11

I miss her hair and her arms
the weather man says dress warm
the winter intends to do me harm
wish I could cuddle up to her charms

But she's left me here
thunder and tears
oh dear
feels like years
since her love was here
together, the kind of weather I'd hold in my heart,
but now we're..

A former wonder
torn terribly asunder
by the beach I wander
soon I'm under
a swelling tide of need and love
yearning for the sun in her

It's true that
all that's good in a man goes to heaven
but I'm still here
weather and emotional developments at 11
busy counting heartbeats, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7
weather and emotional developments at 11

But I don't know if I can wait that long
'cause I'm somewhere lost inside this song

"Hey, it's me, I'm dynamite and I don't know why" -- Van Morrison, 'Sweet Thing'

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1 posted 2007-04-11 09:03 AM


"you always disappear
when you hear
the faintest sound of me adoring your heart"


I can relate to this

Margherita
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2 posted 2007-04-11 01:08 PM


Well, I understand that "you are lost inside this song" because it is very captivating indeed!

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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3 posted 2007-04-11 03:43 PM


Thank you.  I did enjoy the meander through your words!
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-04-11 05:26 PM


"But I don't know if I can wait that long
'cause I'm somewhere lost inside this song"

oh, let's not stop singing till you find the way out.

enjoyed

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