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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2007-04-05 04:11 PM



Though to some it seems -- hodge-podgic,
All the roots are ground -- in logic.
The games-riddles-reason is revealed,
In a place where a child defines the real.
And Oh! Dichotomous friend -- What Bliss!
To unearth the answers buried -- In this.


Red and White Queens plus the Duchess
        Hare and Hatter with Stopped Watches

Cheshire Cat is here and gone
        While Mock Turtle sings his song

Live chess pieces, pack of cards
        Hurried Rabbit, Queen of Hearts

Tweedledee and Tweedledum
        What's the meaning of the sum?
  
In this Wonderland it seems
        That all the world is based on dreams...


...but do not worry, for we see
That one plus two still equals three,
And that we can't have less than none.
So I ask of everyone~

More Tea?

.



© Copyright 2007 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-04-05 05:06 PM


smiling~~  wanted to tell you that I enjoyed your family magician pictures...


M

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2 posted 2007-04-05 05:36 PM


EnchantedLady~

'Tis the season
for rhyme and reason
and I can see that you
have found the ink
to make us think
while we are laughing TOO ~~

Love ya'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-04-05 08:20 PM




delightful Nancy

will we have jam with our tea
or was that yesterday?

I love it

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with you
4 posted 2007-04-05 08:22 PM




OMG this is awesome!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2007-04-05 10:00 PM


Loving the play of words, yet
the meaning of unexplainable
magic!

And this very poem comes
at the most wonderful of times
{i.e., I needed it most!]

so please, do, write on!




Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-05 10:04 PM


fun! to write.

how cheeful! enjoyed.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2007-04-06 12:47 PM


This is just fantastic.
iliana
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8 posted 2007-04-06 02:33 AM


Very clever poem, Nancy Lee....different form for you....it's good, too!  Liked it a bunch....and yes, I'll have some tea, please.  *smiles*...jo
paullallady
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9 posted 2007-04-06 03:35 AM


This was wonderful! The rhyming and flow were terrific and it was so cute and lighthearted.  I really liked this one a lot!
scorpio
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right...there
10 posted 2007-04-06 08:49 AM


Tinker inspired writing.  And I'd love to have tea with you.

believe in what your heart feels...

SimplyGold
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11 posted 2007-04-06 09:31 AM


It is true your poetry is enchanting. I loved it. Makes me realize that I must, must make time to feed and nourish from the greats.

SG

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2007-04-06 01:15 PM


Thank you so much everyone!
Your thoughts on this one are very much appreciated.
~Hugs & Happy Easter, Nancy~

Margherita
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Eternity
13 posted 2007-04-06 01:43 PM


Yes, we can sit and think or we can play and dream ... and beam, like you do, dear enchanted Nancy.

Very beautifully done!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Goodknight
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14 posted 2007-04-06 03:28 PM


Lots of fun Nancy - I enjoyed it very much - Paul
Earth Angel
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15 posted 2007-04-06 05:35 PM


Oh, you truly are an Enchanting Poetess! Both you and your quill are spell-binding and magical!

A charming, whimsical ~ and quizzical ~ write! So good to see you posting again!

Warm loving hug 'n a smile,

Linda


Startime55
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16 posted 2007-04-07 05:30 PM


*giggling with delight*...please pour me another one....Absolutely delightful....I love it...**Big Hugs**
TerryW
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17 posted 2007-04-08 01:52 AM


~Your words of wit and lovely grace
Have placed a smile upon my face!
Oh, to only be a child again,
And lose myself in Wonderland!~

Beautiful!  You make me see an old tale in new light!!

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

passing shadows
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displaced
18 posted 2007-04-08 05:12 AM


well I'm glad this came back up here because I missed it earlier

glad I didn't miss it this go round

JL
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19 posted 2007-04-11 06:02 PM




JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Snowflake From Hell
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20 posted 2007-04-11 07:45 PM


enjoyed as usual

Now feel your fear, there can be only one

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
21 posted 2007-04-11 09:01 PM


~Ah, you guys are great, thank you!!!~

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