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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

0 posted 2007-03-27 12:56 PM

You touch me across these miles.
Funny how I feel you.
I dream you. I see you.
I know the real you.

You touch me across these miles.
I hear you in these songs,
I feel your breath on my skin,
righting all these wrongs.

Funny how I need you...
so far away, but so near.
I know we'll be good together,
and there's nothing I fear.

I'm yours and only yours,
and if nothing else, a friend,
you already know I love you
and that will never end.

I'll be there this weekend,
floating across these miles
to you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-03-27 11:13 AM

A lovely lyrical write Dixie gal!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-03-27 12:11 PM

Have a wonderful weekend! Enjoyed the read!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2007-03-27 03:00 PM

Have a great time dixie

Hope

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

4 posted 2007-03-27 03:39 PM

Lovely poem.

I know what it means to be so far away "across these miles"...

Thanks for sharing.

Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-03-27 04:24 PM

very, VERY nice!
[a grand-pleasant 'read'!]

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2007-03-27 05:31 PM

YOU did it AGAIN...we seem to be on the same page or at least wave length these days

~~~kingsangel~~~

jak
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since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2007-03-27 06:11 PM

truly engaged

Jak
Argonaut - My Poetry Blog

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-03-27 11:14 PM

"And if nothing else, a friend."
Enjoyed...James

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2007-03-28 01:22 PM

hi Dixie

To look forward to something that is always there...nice!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2007-03-28 01:46 PM

well, the trip is cancelled because I have to work but it will be soon

thanks for the great comments

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

11 posted 2007-03-28 08:20 PM

that sucks that it was cancelled but great write

Now feel your fear, there can be only one

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2007-03-29 11:58 AM

Oh! I especially like the feel you/ real you rhyme. Nicely done. And the feel of the whole thing, light but with depth.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

13 posted 2007-03-29 05:18 PM

I'm so sorry your trip was cancelled but I'm going to make lots of wishes for you that you can go soon soon soon!!!

Loved this - when I lived far away from here, I missed someone, just like you've written. I'm so glad to be back where he is just minutes away.

Hugs~~
Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

14 posted 2007-03-30 12:40 PM

so sorry the trip was cancelled
but you know
it's going to happen

"you already know I love you
and that will never end"

wonderful Dixie!

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