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Round and Round it Goes
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Round and Round it Goes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Round and Round it Goes Round and round the merry-go-round Full of fury and full of sound Full of magic and pantomime Spinning the wheel chaos and time Collecting realities seem Potentially bricks of a dream Paths that light the wick of our soul And each life a flight to this goal I see the lanterns in my sight As many as stars that fill the night They come and go fast and slow Some would build and some would crow Spinning the wheel chaos and time Full of magic and pantomime Full of fury and full of sound Round and round the merry-go-round |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..hi Seymour..always a very fine music in your poems..always enjoy how they take me away.. spiros |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spiros Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed the write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Sy! Much enjoyed the write.. but, I kept thinking about the merry-go-round and now I'm dizzy!  Have a great day!  &  , NancyFor it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I printed this one for the girls Seymour as I am giving them a glass globe with a merry-go-round inside for one of their Easter gifts. This being the second of your poems gifted to my two beautiful angels. Have a wonderful day down there in that sunshine. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whimsical enjoyed this Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thak you sweetie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You do me honor, thank you love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thank you dear,  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sy Your amusement park sounds fun, but also very scary. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie It can be both. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
why do I read out a figure eight roller-coaster? always love to read your poem. have a nice day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Because that's what it is. Thank you for the read and comment. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A fine 'write'!!..... As a 'Universalist' (Complexity Scientist/Chaos Theorist) and advocate of the "Deep-Time" paradigm (perspective), I find the following particularly fine!: "Spinning the wheel chaos and time Full of magic and pantomime Full of fury and full of sound Round and round the merry-go-round" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you for the read and fine reply. It is my candy for the day. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hi Seymour. Your first quatrain was a feast in itself. Excellent. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pilgrimage Thank you, thank you, Thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Full of fury and full of sound Round and round the merry-go-round" life explained Sir Sy and explained well too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you dear Lady. |
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