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peppis
New Member

since 2007-03-27

Posts 7
Oregon

0 posted 2007-03-27 12:23 PM

So, this is my first post.  I’ve had writer's block for the last ten years, out of nowhere last week I picked up a notebook and a pencil and started writing again. It felt right =)  Please let me know what you think, I’m not sure if I still have “IT” but can’t fault me for trying =)

Her arms are open wide,
    To take me in to her womb,
Her lack of color is a guide,
    Intriguing me as if it was art,
I try to step back,
    To be cautious and aware,
But the sounds of her waves,
    Keep me in a stare,
Gray clouds surround us,
    In every possible direction,
Black skies engulf us,
    And leave me no other selection,
I step in to her grasp,
    She takes me in to her embrace,
I feel her cold hands,
    Piercing in to my soul,
Taking my heart over,
    Seizing me in her control,
This is it,
    The time has now come,
To swallow my being,
    Punish me for what I have done,
As I take my last breath,
    I feel her enter my lungs,
She swells inside me,
    And cover me,
Her long lost son.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2007-03-27 12:55 PM

There is no fault in trying to write and the way you let up to being the son at the end is interesting as a starter. Welcome aboard!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-03-27 07:41 AM

Mike~
WELCOME to the best circle of poets and friends on the entire Internet~

Not only will you find many talented poets here, by reading them you will find inspiraation to keep your poetic inkwell full~

A very interesting piece ... touching~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-03-27 07:42 AM

pretty good

that's a long time to have writer's block, for sure

welcome to Passions!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-03-27 10:36 AM

Peppis,

Welcome to Passions. An interesting write.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-03-27 10:51 AM

Hello, I much enjoyed your entrance piece.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me. ~

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-03-27 06:20 PM

very good. welcome to this board.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2007-03-27 11:58 PM

We all go through periods where our hearts don't sing. The key is not the 10 year wait but rather when your heart sang again...YOU LISTENED. Congratulations! Welcome to Passions...with a very worthy first posting. Some strive for quantity and others for quality. There are a gifted few who can accomplish both. I encourage you to let your creativity shine. Risk! You are among friends.

INclan

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