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exhale
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0 posted 2007-03-26 05:44 AM


I thought
I felt falling stars
on my checks
sparks in my hair
a fire
to keep
under blankets and pillows
could you trace the constellations
forming on my body

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1 posted 2007-03-26 07:22 AM


Chelsea~
Just lovely and softly poignant~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2007-03-26 07:27 AM


wow! beautiful piece!
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-03-27 07:50 AM


Oh Chelsea, this is soft and sensually lovely.  Just the right touch to make it beautiful.  Good to read you again.
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