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No Rain Today |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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No Rain Today By Paul Wilson A thought passed thru my mind today then it was gone in less time than a tear drop takes to fall My feelings hardly ever exposed… memories buried deep within my heart most I can’t even recall I’m getting better at missing you even though it’s taken it’s toll on me Most days I’m wrapped up in the present till the past and thoughts of you overtake me Ever changing shapes of clouds in the sky leave me guessing and asking why The ups and downs we went thru ended without us saying goodbye Teardrops keep falling or is it the rain washing away memories of you one at a time There’s not a cloud in the sky today so I’ll dry my tears and end these words of rhyme Forecast for tomorrow same as today no rain not a cloud in the sky You have your life and I have mine so this will have to be our last goodbye ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love the rain myself but too much of it is just unbearable everyone needs a sunny day good write Paul, good to read you again |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I love it, I could relate to this so much and I thought it was written beautifully. Excellent. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Paul. Very much enjoyed the read as always.  ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Let it Rain Paul.....sometimes it can be comforting!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Thanks everybody for taking time to read and reply. I really appreciate your concern...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very touching. bye to rainy cloud and bye to salty tear. but memory always take us right back there. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sadly beautiful Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Drautz...Thanks for the read and reply...Paul The Lady...More than you might imagine. Thanks for understanding...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I’m getting better at missing you even though it’s taken it’s toll on me Most days I’m wrapped up in the present till the past and thoughts of you overtake me" I know how this feels...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul "I’m getting better at missing you" understanding |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Paul! "Teardrops keep falling or is it the rain washing away memories of you one at a time" ~ So wistfully sweet. Lovely writing ~ and read!  Sending you a hug-o-love, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ You write of feelings that so many have and don't know how to express~ You do it so well~ Beautiful, and poignant as always~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sometimes the realities of our lives fill us with a sadness of what might have been...I feel these words and know just what you mean...**Big Hugs** |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is very beautiful and poignant. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sea...Thanks for the read and for understanding...Paul Martie...Thanks for the hugs and for caring...Paul Linda...Thank you glad you enjoyed...Paul Marge...Your words always bring a smile to my face and a tear drop from my heart. Thank you so much...Paul Startime55...Thanks for the hugs and for taking time to read and reply...Paul Eloise... Thank you for your kind words and for taking time to read. I appreciate it very much..Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh Paullie-- I think we both needs hugs today. And the beauty of the hug is that it is designed for TWO. Much love to you my dear friend.  |
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jessie Junior Member
since 2007-03-27
Posts 44AUSTRALIA. |
i could read this every day |
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