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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. There was nothing About the way She did it That was special Though now I’m surprised Given the lack of example She did it at all How she would raise Her head and close her eyes When emotional And suddenly the world would stir For though here was something It must have seen before Yet so rare was the experience actual It could not help but pause I was there as well I saw it too And have never stopped Loving her since . |
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1eyeopen Junior Member
since 2007-03-24
Posts 28NY, USA |
This is very good I enjoyed it. If we learn to live life as wisdom, we find enlightenment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
enjoyed. the spirit of your poem is brewed with oceans of feelings. |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
the world would stir indeed Jak |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
you just gave me goosebumps, beautiful poem. |
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