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Kold New Member
since 2007-03-06
Posts 1 |
They know me but can't see it Maybe I do hide it Maybe I'll stay protected if i do Its the sense The drive A young sense but yet so old and used Makes him seem wiser than what he his they say Unleashes a smirking smile when they do say But thats okay Cuz if you do know of it, then you must have it or maybe its seen and you so desperatley want it I tell the closest that It's why he looks at the man that gives that vibe a many times to make sure I tell the closest that It's why he always is the first to speak and the last to say I tell the closest that It's why his actions are so radical but his hands stay so clean Yes, isnt this mean! To not know the meaning! But if one knows the meaning then one knows Its the sense The drive |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Welcome to Pip. I kind of like the closet talk in this poem -- it is an interesting way to express how you feel. A |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I liked Az' comment...but I could see it more as the back and forth thoughts in one's head. Please, check your email for a very special greeting! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your entrance post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
welcome to Passions where we all see the meaning of words strung to together in a different light |
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