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JLHunter
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0 posted 2007-03-03 10:27 PM


Unre-sight-ed Love?

What deceptions wait,
When one is too blind to see
Duplicitous love?

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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Janette
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1 posted 2007-03-04 08:56 AM


Pain and misery is what comes to my mind when one's true intentions are revealed as contradictory in manner.

Good piece - it got me to thinking.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

The Lady
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2 posted 2007-03-04 08:28 PM



and most of us are blind
when it comes to love

nice work

Sunshine
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3 posted 2007-03-04 08:32 PM


Tell us...
for everyone has something yet
to learn

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-03-04 10:25 PM


yeah

you said it

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5 posted 2007-03-05 12:21 PM


nice word play...great lines
JLHunter
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6 posted 2007-03-05 10:41 AM


Thanks, everyone.

Usually, I do individual replies, but I am busy taking care of my mom.  Hence, a all-in-one "thank you."

It is an enduring theme, so I felt that I would attempt a small stab at an obvious question.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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