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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-02-23 11:52 AM



a one woman man
belongs with the likes of you
selflessly giving
~*~
this grand seduction
dangerous yet innocent
as creamed strawberries
~*~
drink from fluted stem
the champagne of providence
heady wine of love

Inspired by : /pip/Forum103/HTML/000309.html

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2007 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2007-02-23 01:01 PM



Beautiful!  

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-02-23 01:06 PM


ohhh melt me why dontcha??  
miscellanea
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OH
3 posted 2007-02-23 05:44 PM


Yep, this is a melter!  Love it, Interloper!

miscellanea

The Lady
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4 posted 2007-02-23 09:38 PM




"dangerous yet innocent
as creamed strawberries"

oh Doctor Love
my goodness
I love it

and the inspiration!

aziza
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5 posted 2007-02-24 12:32 PM


Again, you 1 me over with your words.  
Each is beautiful.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-02-24 01:22 AM


mmm..mmmm.... I like this!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette
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7 posted 2007-02-24 10:38 AM


"the champagne of providence"

Wow ... excellent writing here!  It made me visualize little bubbles floating up and popping, revealing what provisions must be made to keep this love alive into the future.

Romantic and thought provoking ... BRAVO!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2007-02-24 09:38 PM


Two beautiful minds, one perfect thought.
1derful

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9 posted 2007-03-05 04:36 PM


I've found some of those... unfortunately, I was never the woman... but hey... I can wish. *S*

Simply lovely!!!

LeeJ
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10 posted 2007-03-06 11:30 AM


heady wine of love

lately it's been black and tan beer which is on my wine list...

exceptionally written, and unfortunately, never had one of those either...
until now, it is no longer a dream, as I do much better on my own.

I am honored by your awareness, and for the inspiration I provoked that you wrote this charming and profound poem...

lovely, thank you so very much.

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