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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2007-01-19 01:04 PM


Inspired by...
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savvy fingertips say,
search inside this book
travel around the identity behind
this quiet lake, and mold us
into timeless melody....
as if I should say no,
you always knew how difficult
it was for me to pretend...
I can’t understand this torment of you,
this direct bridge into the depth
words escape me…
undying fair-haired stellar connection
in a dark world of secrets
I am a one-man woman
let it be love
when we meet again
love in your breath
mostly dangerous
yet I am the mistress
of your wicked mind
let us meet at midnight
my pleasure is your seduction
my surrender
your passionate wishes are
my diamond slipper
almost innocent
growing to womanhood
in a champagne & strawberry
kinda feeling
carefree & full of surprises
are my no’s
your properous destiny
of silver nights
bewitched senseless

© Copyright 2007 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-01-19 01:31 PM


LeeJ
Oh my, Oh my Enjoyed the read.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-01-19 01:32 PM


Gosh, Lee! You were bewitching ME senseless! lol

A sensuous and stirring spill from your sexy self! Yowza, yowza!  


Linda

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-01-19 02:57 PM


"savvy fingertips say,
search inside this book
travel around the identity behind
this quiet lake, and mold us
into timeless melody...."

Beautiful music indeed.
Your expertise!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2007-01-19 03:04 PM


Absolutely beautiful, LeeJ.
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
5 posted 2007-01-19 03:57 PM


I am honored and ...
you guessed it ...
INSPIRED

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2007-01-19 07:02 PM




"love in your breath"

it is such a bewitching work LeeJ!

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2007-01-19 08:43 PM



and I?  Am in awe.  

Well done, m'friend.


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
8 posted 2007-01-20 06:00 AM


LeeJ... wow!!!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Louisiana
9 posted 2007-01-23 03:00 PM


I am a one-man woman
let it be love
when we meet again
love in your breath

What a wonderful write! *S* I love this one, dear lady! *S* And the chain of poets inspiring other poets is a delight! *S*

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