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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-02-15 04:42 AM




While Questioning Things

A heart and mind in debate
Having in-between times
Nothing seemed to blend
Yet I jotted down a few lines

I have been feeling at a loss
Still my emotions remain
While I attempted to write
Often it was hard to explain

Something did seem wrong
When it always felt right
Yet nothing dulls the ache
When knots gripped so tight

Enduring times such as this
While questioning things
Emotions that I feel within
Still tug upon my heartstrings

HopeĀ©2007
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-15 08:39 AM


A heart and mind in debate
Having in-between times
Nothing seemed to blend
Yet I jotted down a few lines

Enjoy those in-between times and perhaps with a little luck, answers might tap you on the shoulder....

Hugs for someone who looked love right in the face and smiled...this kind of love always stays with you...and it's nice to know, we've known it...yanno, even though time changes things...

Hugs to you

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