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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-02-15 03:01 AM



Well..i couldn't write anything for valentine but i still wish you all had a perfect valentine's day.


Here we go,

The Truth About You

when we are together
time passes quickly
when we are together
i don't realize
how much i love you

i haven noticed this beforte
'cause you have been always by my side
but now, you are gone, and i do see
the truth about you
the one i never told you

when we are together
i lose the flow of time
now that you aren't next to me
i can't imagine
a single day without you

now you've heard
the truth about you
the truth about my love
haven't told you before
'cause i didn't notice
'cause now i miss those things

the truth about you
those words i never told you
the only thing i could never tell you
those two words you long desired to hear
i love you

now you've heard
the truth about you
the truth about my love

i could only realize
all this things
now that you are faraway
i realized how kind you are
and how beautifull your eyes are
the beauty of your smile
and the warm of your lips

i've already told you
the truth about you
the truth about my love
and i just hope
you'll some day
read all this
and you'll come back

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-15 08:43 AM


heartwarming write, very well done...loved the honesty that shone from this...
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