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window (the michael poems)
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window (the michael poems) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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dark of leftover night through life window see in blue I sit at kitchen table coffee lips not quite awake you pad about in morning feet tending little chores your smile tips itself my way tired content my eyes reach for it slowly sipping memory of night before yielding feel of knowing each other like old books my blue robe like the quiet waiting your hand on my shoulder my mind leaning on your hip bone our eyes search table knowing where the first yellow rays will lay themselves where they have always laid themselves silent hearts bound and tied watching the day be born |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yielding feel of knowing each other like old books my blue robe like the quiet waiting ~*~ my robe is green...   |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and there you were Karilea looking through the window  thank you in your green robe  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate... 'sigh' you sure know how to write these wonderful lines very well!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Loved this line..Though coffee is the only thing that warms my lips ): I enjoy your series.! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Bill I'm sorry coffee is the only thing that warms your lips...  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
though I misread the title earlier (read it as 'widow' instead of 'window') and had a very difficult time reconciling this beautiful write with my mistaken title, came back to it with glasses on and appreciate it so much more...lovely...(and the title now makes sense) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
laughing that would make a difference steaven thank you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very...very...delicate. Oh how I love this series Lady Kate. In the midst of winter, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
your hand on my shoulder my mind leaning on your hip bone our eyes search table knowing where the first yellow rays will lay themselves that's awesome! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A very comfortable write Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your hand on my shoulder my mind leaning on your hip bone our eyes search table knowing where the first yellow rays will lay themselves where they have always laid themselves silent hearts bound and tied watching the day be born stunning!!!!! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
a beautiful, serene snapshot loved these lines: "...my eyes reach for it slowly sipping memory of night before..." says it all CG |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady Kate You make it real, not with words searched for in some dark place, but right there coloring your pretty grace! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Nancy thanks for the awesome Dixie… ah Doctor Love yes… comfortable thank you LeeJ thank you kindly thank you for your comment CG… sweet Martie thank you for the pretty answer |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
omg how delicate this..........lady Kate, this is exceptional writing. looks so lovely on you. |
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