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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-02-07 02:33 PM


Confined to a strip between the sea
and the mountains of everyday life
courage is shelled and moves like a crab
as if it is going somewhere.

Oh, it blusters and shouts and tries to get out
from the folds of a hardened gut
but always a sideways movement
the definite way to extinction
of the perceived unique.

Left/right, left/right; how boring is life
when courage afraid to swim
or climb the mountain of life’s disdain
into love’s mystery
hanging like a voluptuous cloud
in tempt of the scared, afraid.

Courage!  Yes, yes!  It’s the mind of a fool
who cares not to leave level ground
but one with the courage to forsake all others
for the meaningful things in life
rises above the imaginings
and lands in a beautiful place!

Helen / 7 February 2007

© Copyright 2007 Helen - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-02-07 05:04 PM


Left/right, left/right; how boring is life
when courage afraid to swim
or climb the mountain of life’s disdain
into love’s mystery
hanging like a voluptuous cloud
in tempt of the scared, afraid.


I agree...but sometimes fear is hard to overcome.


M

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2007-02-07 10:19 PM



great work Helen!

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-02-07 10:43 PM


Courage!  Yes, yes!  It’s the mind of a fool

~*~

And yet, Helen...
where would the next step come from...

enjoyed this very much!


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2007-02-08 05:36 PM


Hi Helen...I hope you are well..I've missed you and your poetry, deeply thought-full.   
Winter Butterfly
Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61
The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.
5 posted 2007-02-08 06:15 PM


I loved this poem. A wonderful read after a long day.

"The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump."

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2007-02-08 10:17 PM


another wonderful piece!
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2007-02-09 03:29 AM


Oh, Helen!  I do love this one.  It has been so long since I've spent much time here lately but I am going to trying and remedy that.  Hope you are well, my friend.  *hugs*....jo
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