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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-02-05 11:25 AM



my greatest desire
to fulfill your fondest wish
are they congruent

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2007 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2007-02-05 11:36 AM



~&~

Lingering wishes
Fulfillment is multiplied
Quiet collision

~&~

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2 posted 2007-02-05 11:37 AM


Hmmm...I would say they are quite agreeable 'Loper.
No puce in Texas?  Ahh come on!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2007-02-05 11:50 AM


Loper~
Your worded desires
Could get me quickly banished
By Nan's eraser~

I will self-edit
The truest thoughts this evokes
For community~

Giggle, as I might
Your crystal ball should surely
Read desiring minds~

*Huglets*
~*Me

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-02-05 11:52 AM


I would think so
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5 posted 2007-02-05 01:05 PM


absolutley....enjoyed
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2007-02-05 01:40 PM


Lady in White ~
quiet colusion
the collision not quite so
this ardent amour

Nancy ~
Nope.  In Texas we call it Plink

Marge ~
I luv the way you think m'love

ps ~
Ya think?  OK, I'll take yore wurd fur it

LeeJ ~
gr8

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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7 posted 2007-02-05 09:45 PM




congruent as a couple triangles Doctor Love

I like this...

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2007-02-05 11:04 PM


Intersections vine
Magnetized by destiny
As hearts and lips meet

~*~

Enjoyed these thoughts

steavenr
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9 posted 2007-02-05 11:32 PM


to your question:  they are...they are best when they are...proof is in the practice...nice write...great thought
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2007-02-06 09:31 AM


Lady ~
congruency is
delightful as you can see
triangularly

TD ~
Hollywood and Vine
most famous intersection
capitol of kiss

steavenr ~
'tis best when they are
the proof is in the pudding
thanks for the comment

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2007-02-06 08:54 PM


Nice...James
Angel4aKing
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12 posted 2007-02-07 03:33 PM


And if only I knew what his true greatest desire was....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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