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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2007-02-06 10:28 PM


Can you see
I’m playing time against my mind
My faults are cascading
One by one
Two by tens
I must find my way out
I must find a way in
I wonder if you
If you could lend
hands
Eye to eye
I see it your way
I wonder if you ever could
See it all
Know it all

In time
And without a thought at all
You start the count
One by one
Two by tens
I must find my way out
I must find a way in
Heading straight
Delusional
Funny, funny
Has it always been this way?
Tragically I suppose
But then you wonder too
At least enough to slow
To light speed
Enough to collect and

Count
One by one
Two by tens
I’ll never find
no never
my way out or in



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Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2007-02-07 06:43 AM


But then you wonder too
At least enough to slow
To light speed
Enough to collect and

Count

~*~

So slow down
breathe
between the tock
of moment
to moment

Well done, Robert!

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2007-02-07 07:25 AM


much enjoyed
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-02-07 02:00 PM


Well write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-02-07 02:03 PM


whew, I couldn't take a breath while reading this...captured the moment well
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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5 posted 2007-02-07 03:30 PM


and I shall be the bridge stretched across time that you may find entry my friend. I really like this alot.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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